My best friend, Lily, is the kindest person I know. We met in primary school and have been inseparable for six years. With her bright *ile and warm heart, she always supports me.
Last month, I struggled with math. Lily patiently tutored me after school, explaining problems step by step. Her encouragement boosted my confidence, and I improved greatly. She also inspires me with her love for reading and curiosity about science.
True friendship, I believe, means growing together. Lily teaches me kindness and perseverance. I’m grateful to have her in my life.
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1. 结构清晰(引入朋友→具体事例→感悟),符合英语作文框架。
2. 用词简洁地道(inseparable, patiently, perseverance),避免复杂句。
3. 融入具体事例(辅导数学),增强真实性。
4. 结尾升华主题,突出友谊意义。
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